CTickler's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chef Suzie Creations]

Interesting and Professional

This is a really cool product. I liked that the instructions were verbal since that would be particularly good for children whose reading skills might not be very confident. However, I think one way you could improve this flash would be to add either subtitles or a written summary of the recipe at the end of each section. That way anyone who wanted to see the recipe written down wouldn't have to make their own notes.

orv responds:

Subtitles were part of my original idea, I just ran out of time.

Thanks for the review!

[Emo Song]

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Screamers are lame, there's even a section specifically in the submission agreement telling you they're lame. It would have been quite funny if this was 1999 ... Try something else, at least the emo part wasn't too bad.

RobbyD responds:

true