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Age/Gender: 21, Female
Location: UK
Job: Character Animator
Current Flash project: "Lorelei's Dream"
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Heh, I was expecting this to be "lol the clit0ris doesn't exist lol" crap. 10 for accuracy and awesomeness.
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Trace bitmap: "I could tell them but they still won't understand it" ?
Maybe if you learned to make better tutorials they would.
This was very laborious and frustrating to sit through - the animated illustration of every step was totally unnecessary. And most people know how to open a new file in flash. Other than that, your method on manipulating sprite sheets isn't very efficient - there are plenty of little things you could have done to speed up the process.
The point of a tutorial is to be brief, concise and to illustrate the steps involved precisely. The useful parts of this tutorial were completely lost in the pointless animations and obvious steps.
Author's Response:
you make think there obvious steps but others don;t some people don;t know theses so called "obvious steps" thats why i have them so even the stupiest of people can understand it
Thanks for the review
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Great game; i loved the attention to detail with the sound organisation in particular. Being able to take a mugshot at the end was cool too. The only thing I would suggest for improvement would be a tidier organisation of clothing. Other than that, great stuff ^^
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There are a lot of aspects to this flash that make it near impossible to access the tutorial information it contains. There was the overly loud and annoying music at the start, the problems with the custom cursor and the over-large text which makes it difficult to focus on the code being discussed. All of these things are unnecessary to a tutorial. A successful tutorial is clear, concise and with few distractions. If you at least removed the faulty custom cursor it would be a start.
Author's Response:
If you thought the music was annoying, why not turn it off with that off button in the top right corner? And i'm sorry about the fault mouse, im fixing that right now...and the text distracted you? how much consentration do you have to have to right click and press select?...but i'll try and fix it
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The graphics were the best part of this game, they're well drawn and look cute :3 The music was good too although I would have preferred to be able to turn it off after a while.
Suggestions for improvements include a play/stop button for the music and a better system of organisation for the clothes and accessories. When they're all piled up together it's hard to see individual items, which is a shame because some of them were really novel.
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Gorgeous art style and animation. Is it wrong to say the story's "awesome" when it's that tragic?
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It was fun, but could be improved by the draggable clothes being more similar in quality to the images underneath.
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XD
Funny in a dumbass kinda way. I realise the "facts" are supposed to be incorrect for the purposes of the humour, but sometimes it came across as merely retarded rather than ironic. Awesome music and graphics though.
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The first version of the game was fun and this makes a lot of really cool improvements. I like how the guys' penises are all different styles ;) also the orgasm meter being different shapes is a really interesting innovation.
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I liked keeping an eye on the different bars - it was well put together in that respect, although sliding the mouse over the top bar felt kinda clumsy and difficult to control. You definitely put a lot of effort into the backstory though, and the sound was awesome too ^^
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