Score: 2

"Huge loading time"

submission: Sound Maker v.1

date: July 10, 2007

I had to give up on this game, the loading time is way too long to be acceptable. I thought the loading animation itself was quite cool looking so i gave credit for that, i'm assuming the final flash has an interesting style too. Hope you work out your size problems.

Score: 8

"Great Layout"

submission: Basic Button Tutorial

date: July 2, 2007

I was really surprised by this, it's great. For one thing, everything you told the viewer to do was correct and made sense, unlike the majority of tutorials that cover button making and other simple aspects of flash. I'm sick of seeing "ok lol now i show how to make button: first, do something retarded, second, do something that is unecessary and wrong ..." I guess I should be more sympathetic to people learning flash but those people shouldn't be making tutorials, dammit -_-
Anyway, I also love the layout you chose, it's so clean and simple. It'd be great to see your tutorials on the more complex aspects of flash ^^

Score: 8

"pretty cool"

submission: Bob the Guitar Hero

date: June 30, 2007

This was fun, reminded me of Chips ^^
There are a couple of things I'd suggest to improve it, such as a replay button on the "game over" screen, easier to click "next level" buttons, and maybe a less garish background. Other than that it was good, maybe add a few more levels and make it harder? I'd look forward to it.

Score: 4

"..."

submission: Emo Song

date: June 30, 2007

Screamers are lame, there's even a section specifically in the submission agreement telling you they're lame. It would have been quite funny if this was 1999 ... Try something else, at least the emo part wasn't too bad.

Score: 8

"Nice graphics"

submission: Sikk Sound Board

date: June 29, 2007

Cool soundboard. Sounds like the raid leader is a dick, which makes for stressful raiding and hilarious soundclips. Could use a preloader and maybe less abrupt sound cut offs, but other than that, I liked it ^^

Score: 9

"Cute :3"

submission: Dress Up

date: June 29, 2007

I had fun with this - the choices of clothing are quite original and your colouring for the whole game is co-ordinated and soothing, unlike a lot of games where some idiot does everything in screaming primary colours.

I agree with what other reviewers have said about adding things to the game to improve it - sound, animation, backgrounds, etc. Another thing I would suggest is some system of organisation for your clothing items. I know there's not a lot of room, but a line of static text or something equally simple saying "makeup" with the eyeshadow items under it would really help a lot as it took me a moment or two to work out what some items were supposed to be.

Another option with the makeup would be to have it on the doll already and to click a button that makes it visible/change the colour. This can save more space for the bigger clothing items and feel a lot more sophisticated to play.

Anyway, I hope to see more flashes from you, this was good ^^

Score: 7

"Not a bad game"

submission: Jason's Dressup

date: June 23, 2007

This isn't a bad game, it's got better art than a lot of the flashes that get submitted and there are some interesting options, such as the surfboard. In terms of improving your interpretation of the dressup game genre, I would say try to organise the clothing options in a more sophisticated manner, such as pushing a button to see the t-shirts, a button to see the shoes, etc. Also try to add something that players can't get from other dress up games, like an interesting animation, a hidden easter egg, that sort of thing.
In terms of how good the submission is by Newgrounds standards, a lot of people won't like this simply because it's a dressup game with no extra hentai to make it worth their while, and since the dress up game genre is somewhat overdone anyway. You've already said that you made this to accompany your webcomic, so I wouldn't let the reviews bother you: for what it is, this is a decent flash.

Score: 9

"Beautiful"

submission: ExtraLovely HentaiPuzzle1

date: June 20, 2007

Awesome scripting work here 0_0
The graphics and sound are great: the background and music are perfect together. Really nice choice of images too.
Hope to see more soon - as far as themes are concerned, the lesbian theme is great; maybe slightly kinkier images, softcore bondage, that sort of thing. :3

Score: 8

"Has Potential"

submission: Escape Pink Room

date: June 17, 2007

I agree with what other reviewers have said in that it is quite frustrating when there is no indication of where to click to go from a view of the chest to the bedroom, for example. The game could also benefit from having brief instructions at the start of the game, such as explaining that there are a limited amount of items you can carry. Games like this are awesome, I'd love to see an improved version.

Score: 0

"This is sad."

submission: Salad Fingers Episode 8

date: June 15, 2007

I'm guessing you noticed how popular David Firth's stuff is and it just broke your heart?