Age/Gender: 23, Female
Location: UK
Job: Character Animator
Current Flash project: "Lorelei's Dream"
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Your hand-drawn traditional stuff is great, must have taken you ages to draw the woodcutter in particular. Your flash stuff, particularly where combining animation/photos is concerned, could use practise, but I'm sure it'll come to you. Overall, a really cool idea :D
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"Savour" or "savor" depending on if you're Brit or US.
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This is a really cool product. I liked that the instructions were verbal since that would be particularly good for children whose reading skills might not be very confident. However, I think one way you could improve this flash would be to add either subtitles or a written summary of the recipe at the end of each section. That way anyone who wanted to see the recipe written down wouldn't have to make their own notes.
Author's Response:
Subtitles were part of my original idea, I just ran out of time.
Thanks for the review!
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